Miss Ching

Hi Kikaharu! Don't hate me, please, but I didn't like this poem. (But really that's just my opinion!! It doesn't mean that others won't like it!) It just didn't really ...

I agree with the two people before me. This truly is brilliant. The emotion is there. The feeling is there. It's the scene that so many children fear the most: ...

Hi Elinor! I've got a few nitpicks: [1] Though you're dressed in rags you wear an air of queenly grace This was just a typo I think. [2] The sky ...

Hi Blink! Cool poem ;) I whisper my words through the cold paned glass. No ear can hear them, no voice replies. The third line to this sound kind of ...

Hi kmb_7803! I'm Miss Ching and I'll be your reviewer this time! :D I want to say, firstly, that I really like your writing style. It's fun, interesting and unique ...

Hello Black_Panther! :D I like the concept of your story. You've done well with personifying the cheetahs. In just this short part, you've shown exactly who's boss with the cheetahs, ...

Hi! I like your idea, very creative. I have a few things that I'd like to point out though. I have a problem with your first paragraph. You say that ...

Hi Boni_Bee! I think you've got an interesting start for your story. It really grabs the readers' attention. Just some things: 1. You've missed some periods. Wake to the sound ...

Hi lauren94nell and welcome to YWS! Firstly I'd like to congratulate you for having such a captivating story that I didn't click the back button after the first paragraph. There ...

Hello sparrowrules! I want to say that your story seems like a children's story. If that's what you're going for then that's really great! But anyway, the reason I think ...

Hi Fearless! First off, I'd like to say that this really all belongs in a blog. :) This forum is for sharing your works, not your rants. (sorry if I ...

Nice poem! At first I thought, like most everybody else, that you were talking about a person. I thought maybe your sister. But no, it was a chicken! It was ...

Wow I loved your poem! You made a poem about a fruit so interesting and fun! One thing: Shining like an afternoon sun The orange brings a feeling of light ...

Hello. I've first got to say that from the title of the poem and the rating, I thought this was another poem about rape so I avoided it for a ...

Hi! You have a really interesting story. You kept me reading 'till the end and not many stories can do that. I'm a naturally lazy person so if there isn't ...